[kaddo]

Hallo..
Ich muss in der nächsten Zeit in der Schule eine Art Kurzreferat in der Schule halten - Auf Englisch. Da dachte ich mir, was kann besser sein als Charlie Sheen?.
Wichtig: Es geht dabei überhaupt nicht um den Inhalt des Textes. Er muss lediglich halbwegs Frei und sicher vorgetragen werden.
Daher würde ich euch bitten, wenn ihr wollt, einmal einen Blick hier rüber zu werfen, ob der Text so einigermaßen ok ist.
Wäre sehr nett, dankeschön!

Charlie Sheen
Carlos Irwin Estevez

Today I talk something about Carlos Irwin Estevez, better known as Charlie Sheen. He was born in 1965, at 3rd September in New York City. Sheen has been married three times and has five Children. He acts in for example in the sitcom Chaos City and the films Scary Movie 3 and Due Date.
Specialy I talk about his role as Charlie Harper in the sitcom „Two and a half men“ and his dismissal of Warner Bros.
In his role as Charles Francis Harper, short Charlie Harper, he earns a lot of money, because he has part of the right of Two and a half men. For the seasons 1-7 he earns 850.000$ per episode and for the 8th season, only 16 episodes, 1,25 Mio $ per episode. He was the highest-paid actor in the world!
In February 2011 ends the production of Two and a half Men with Charlie Sheen, after only 16 Episodes of the 8th season, because he had offended the owner of the series. The other reason is that he falled into many drugs- and alcoholic-atics. Recently he lives in a triangular relationship with an porn star and a model.
Some medias reported the so-called reason. He was forbidden to see his sons.
Now he takes it very easier than before with drugs and alcohol. He said that he can take more drugs as any other person and so on.
In the 9th season he is „replaced“ by Ashton Kuther, but it's not very sure, what is the task of Ashton Kutcher, alias Walden Schmidt in Two and a half men.

[the_special_one]

Mein Vorschlag:

Charlie Sheen
Carlos Irwin Estevez

Today I will tell you something about Carlos Irwin Estevez, better known as Charlie Sheen. He was born in New York City in 1965. Sheen has been married three times and has five Children. He acts for example in the sitcom Chaos City and the films Scary Movie 3 and Due Date.
Specially I talk about his role as Charlie Harper in the sitcom „Two and a half men“ and his dismissal of Warner Bros.
In his role as Charles Francis Harper, short Charlie Harper, he earns a lot of money, because he has part of the right of Two and a half men. During the seasons 1-7 he earned 850.000$ per episode and during the 8th season, only 16 episodes, 1,25 Mio $ per episode. He was the highest-paid actor in the world!
The production of Two and a half Men with Charlie Sheen ended in February 2011 , after only 16 Episodes of the 8th season, because he had offended the owner of the series. Anlother reason is that he did too many drugs. Currently he lives in a triangular relationship with an porn star and a model.
Some medias reported the so-called reason for this: He is not allowed to see his sons.
Now he became even less serious about drugs and alcohol: He states that he could take more drugs as any other person in the world and so on.
In the 9th season he is „replaced“ by Ashton Kuther, but it's not very sure, what is the task of Ashton Kutcher, alias Walden Schmidt in Two and a half men.

Ich hab mal nur das gröbste gemacht und die Satzstellung teilweise korrigiert.
Ein paar Fehler sind noch drin, aber ansonsten wirkt es ja nicht "echt".

[kaddo]

Morgen,

Ich hab mal nur das gröbste gemacht und die Satzstellung teilweise korrigiert.
Ein paar Fehler sind noch drin, aber ansonsten wirkt es ja nicht "echt".

Sollte auch nicht ganz korrigiert werden. Da ich kein Ass in Englisch bin, hab ich mal gefragt. Werde den eh "wenig" ablesen und versuchen frei zu sprechen. Von daher denke ich, passt es schon.
Danke!

[JohnnyTapia]

Maybe you can add your own position in relation to the change of charly and Walden... whether the sitcom is still as successful as before the changes...

rgds