Korrektur 3. Text:
3.)Analyse language and style of the article!
In the text writen by Jasmin C. ,, A Shakespear-Prep'' the author deals with the story of a young girl who found herself and began a new life.
The author of the text uses lots of chiasmss - was genau soll das sein?,, i am (line(l) 1.f) and ,,i am (l.2).
In (l.2) she uses a simile, an explicit comparison between two distinctly different things which have at least one feature in common ,, as night and day''.
In the next paragraph she uses an alliteration, a recurrence of initial sounds. The authors aim of the aliterations is to convey images to the audience.
At (l 15-27) the author uses much of chiasms. The effect of this are that she discribes only one person and that this person stands in the center.
ACHTUNG:
du vergisst sehr häufig das 3. Person Einzahl s
auch wechselst du sehr häufig die Geschlechter, zB bei der Autorin Jasmin C - eindeutig eine Frau!
Zudem solltest du nicht allzuviele Vokabeln verwenden, die (und das unterstelle ich dir einfach einmal) deinem eigenen Wortschatz entsprechen.
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