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Hey ich habe ein comment geschrieben und wollte wissen ob da noch fehler drin sind und ob die Gramatik so geht



mfg Husti_nett
Ps bin jetzt nich so gut in englisch also bitte nehmt mich nicht aueiander

Also es sind durchaus noch "einige" Fehler drinne soweit ich das sehen kann... Und mit der Gramatik haperts leider auch etwas...

Darf ich raten??? Google Übersetzer?^^

Teils Teils ;)
also ich habe jetzt nicht einen deutschen text ins englsich übersetzt

so oft das "too" drin... das sollte eher "to" sein

Cloning is a current topic today. Each person has already thought of it. But is cloning really a good idea or is it too early for the humanity nowadays? Cloning has many pro and contra arguments. But I think it is not good to clone people because every person has to be unique in our world. Let me explain my arguments in the following comment.
At first, I think that each person want to have their own clone because they can let them do anything what they don´t want to do themselve. That can be homework, work or housework. The humans would exploit them for everything because they are all a bit lazy and selfish. For example take a little boy who's at school but he is not really ineterested in school or doing his homework. So he decides to clone himself and sends his clone to school instead of him. Now he will be able to perform any other activities he likes as playing play station or football or something else. The contraverse in this scenario is that the boy will remain an illiterate and will never be able to find a suitable job. If you take a closer look on this situation from the Clone's point of view it will become clear that he will replace his "Creator" in life and will become his slave.
Secondly, I think that some people would only clone themselves for fun or boredom. That would result in overpopulation of our earth. That leads to food shortage, less water and less flats. In the worst case many people will die because of the mentioned above. Take a girl which is bored and don't know how to spend her free time. Then she gets the idea that it would be lovely having clones of her to play with. The girl will not know what will be the effect of her actings.
My last argument is that women might get overattracted by the opportunity to avoid common births. If they can just go ahead and clone their children from their gens they do not have to face the exhaustion and stress caused by natural pregnancy.
For example there is an old woman having one child. She wants to have more children but she's afraid of the struggle and too old already. If she would clone her child, she would interfere with nature's rules and would destroy the balance of the things as well. If she is not able to give birth because of her age than she should not become mother again. The human shouldn´t play with the nature.
That were my arguments and because of that I think that cloning is not an option and should be banned for all times. The humans would just use the cloning to follow their own rules and that would result in chaos. Bad things will happen if each individum can grow new life after their imaginations. So I came to the conclusion that the human race should use the technology of cloning for science and development as only purpose. As long as there is no reason for cloning humans as any virus or disease spreading it should never be considered as an option.

Cloning is a current topic today. Each person has already thought of it. But is cloning really a good idea or is it to early for the humanity nowadays? Cloning has many pro and contra arguments. But I think isn't good to clone people because every person has to be unique in our world. Let me explain my arguments in the following comment.

At first, I think each person want to have their own clone because they can let them do anything what they don´t want to do themselve. That can be homework, work or housework. (Was willst du mit homework und housework sagen?


The humans would exploit them for everything because they are all a bit lazy and selfish.
For example:

Take a little boy who's at school but he isn't really interested in school or doing his homework. He decides to clone himself and send his clone to school instead of him.

Now he will be able to perform any other activities. He likes playing playstation or football or something else.

The contraverse in this scenario is, that the boy will remain an illiterate and will never be able to find a suitable job.

If you take a closer look on this situation from the Clone's point of view it will become clear that he will replace his "Creator" in life and will become his slave.
Secondly, I think that some people would only clone themselves for fun or boredom.

That result would be overpopulation of our earth.

That leads to food shortage, less water and less flats. In the worst case many people will die because of the mentioned above.

Take a girl which is bored and don't know how to spend her free time. Then she gets the idea that it would be lovely having clones of her to play with. The girl will not know what will be the effect of her actings.
My last argument is that women might get overattracted by the opportunity to avoid common births. If they can just go ahead and clone their children from their gens they don't have to face the exhaustion and stress caused by natural pregnancy.

For example there is an old woman having one child. She wants to have more children but she's afraid of the struggle and to old already.

If she would clone her child, she would interfere with nature's rules and would destroy the balance of the things as well.

If she is not able to give birth because of her age than she should not become mother again. The human shouldn´t play with the nature.

These are my arguments and because of that I think that cloning is not an option and should be banned for all times.

The humans would just use the cloning to follow their own rules and that would result in chaos. Bad things will happen if each individum can grow new life after their imaginations.

I came to the conclusion the human spirit should use the technology of cloning for science and development as only purpose. As long as there is no reason for cloning humans as any virus or disease spreading it should never be considered as an option.



Hab es mal bissl geaendert. Das ist schon recht Denglisch :P

Haha, wie geil. Mir war eigentlich nur langweilig und ich hab ein bissel rumgespielt. Du solltest nicht vergessen, der Text sollte nicht allzu perfekt sein. Wenn Du Dir den Ausgangstext mal ansiehst, wird die Lehrerin nur stutzig wenn Sie aufeinmal nen native text um die Ohren bekommt von nem 3-4er Schueler, verstehste. War schon okay denke ich und sollte den TE besser hinstellen als der erste Text.

Die Argumentation war ja relativ schwach, dass laesst einen auf eine niedrige Klassenstufe schliessen daher wollte ich das ned gross aendern.

Ich habs auch nicht viel geaendert, einige kleine Fehler korrigiert. Aber wie du schon sagtest, es ist halt kein guter englischer Text. Vieles wiederholt sich, dennoch kann man verstehen was derjenige damit beschreibt. Und das ist meisst auch der wichtige Teil!